Oh wow, you're offering such a generous return on investment and loan financing - why would I even bother looking anywhere else? You must be the only venture capital company out there. Please don't waste your time reviewing my business plan or executive summary - just send me the money already! Thanks for your offer example.com
We provide funding through our venture capital company to both start-up and existing companies either looking for funding for expansion or to accelerate growth in their company.
We have a structured joint venture investment plan in which we are interested in an annual return on investment not more than 10% ROI. We are also currently structuring a convertible debt and loan financing of 3% interest repayable annually with no early repayment penalties.
We would like to review your business plan or executive summary to understand a much better idea of your business and what you are looking to do, this will assist in determining the best possible investment structure we can pursue and discuss more extensively.
I hope to hear back from you soon.
Devcorp International W.L.L.
P.O Box 10236 Shop No. 305
Flr 3 Manama Centre, Bahrain
Email: tigran.a@devcorpinternational.com
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